Every moment,
Can’t be savored enough,
Can’t be held forever, like it should be.
Where those moments can’t exist,
Anymore.
That raw emptiness,
That passive grasping for something more,
Rendered useless.
If these moments,
Can last forever,
Then why shouldn’t they?
9 comments:
this is good..................
Hey, Fab Five! Nice! Love the title AND the poem! (as well as the background!)
Did this really mean anything when you wrote it, or are you just making fun of someone??? XD
awesome piece write more :)
wow this is depressing. but i love it though.
Yes, the background is delicious. :)
Those commas are really annoying me. Otherwise, awesome. Livin' the real life, huh?
POST MORE, FLIPPERS. MORE.
DUDE, WHERE ARE YOU.
...AND I SAY THAT WITH A PERIOD TO STRESS THE FACT THAT I AM CONFUSED, IN AN AWKWARDLY NOT-CARING-ABOUT-PUNCTUATION SORT OF WAY.
I don't know, just go with it.
i know seriously! did you like fall of the face of the earth and die or something!? lolz
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