Tuesday, July 22, 2008

I just guess i'm in a Fab Five mood today :)

Every moment,
Can’t be savored enough,
Can’t be held forever, like it should be.

And I don’t want to live the day,
Where those moments can’t exist,
Anymore.

I don’t want to feel,
That raw emptiness,
That passive grasping for something more,
Rendered useless.

If these moments,
Can last forever,
Then why shouldn’t they?

9 comments:

Maddie said...

this is good..................

Bela said...

Hey, Fab Five! Nice! Love the title AND the poem! (as well as the background!)

Gina said...

Did this really mean anything when you wrote it, or are you just making fun of someone??? XD

Mara Kate said...

awesome piece write more :)

Mackenzie said...

wow this is depressing. but i love it though.

Maria said...

Yes, the background is delicious. :)

Those commas are really annoying me. Otherwise, awesome. Livin' the real life, huh?

Bela said...

POST MORE, FLIPPERS. MORE.

Bela said...

DUDE, WHERE ARE YOU.


...AND I SAY THAT WITH A PERIOD TO STRESS THE FACT THAT I AM CONFUSED, IN AN AWKWARDLY NOT-CARING-ABOUT-PUNCTUATION SORT OF WAY.






I don't know, just go with it.

Mackenzie said...

i know seriously! did you like fall of the face of the earth and die or something!? lolz