Monday, July 21, 2008

uhhhh im bored so i wrote this fictional poetry, enjoy it my Fruit Loops w/out milk (cuz they're better that way...)

With hand outsretched,
and gnarled from years of emotion,
he offered to help me up,
and bewildered was i,
at such a happening of this old man,
helping me up from the ground,
nodding all-knowingly....

3 comments:

Maddie said...

this is good but what does it have to do with Fruit Loops?

Gina said...

Believe it or not, they're actually "Froot Loops", maybe to promote illiteracy?

Anyway, this would be somewhat in the style of e. e. cummings if you didn't capitalize the first word. Then again, e. e. cummings doesn't capitalize anything, even his own name...

Bela said...

Um...I think he's calling US "Fruit Loops without milk"...

Hey, what are you implying???